http://gambitsfox.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] gambitsfox.livejournal.com) wrote on September 5th, 2015 at 05:01 pm
I think you did a marvelous job on the story. There seems to be so little you can do when characters are built up to be so bad. They must be punished but I like how you had him feeling differently later. Loved the note from Nino encouraging him to hang in there. Very sweet! Thanks again and will look forward to the rest of it. : )
 
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