andy!!! since I have some time I will comment everything xD I really love this fic as expected, I knew from the plot that it would be great :D ohchan is such an asshole but knowing you I bet he has his reasons xD but my poor kazu who goes through lots of hard things :( poor bb TT I feel sad for Aiba and sho, they have to deal with such a dangerous situation, if they are caught.... well, I pray they won't...
and to finish.... STOP IT WITH YOUR DAMN CLIFFANGER!!!!!!

xDDDD chuuuuuu