You gotta be kidding me! This is your first time writing this type story!? Dang girl! Your fantastic! I can really feel your characters emotions. Ohno being protective, Jun being strict yet loving, Nino being hopeful and careful, and even Masaki and Sho being little horny boys! Lol! I'm probably using very general terms for them but my brain is still mush from those sexy scenes in this chapter! So looking forward to your next one!😉💜💛